Prompt #3
The television has become a very important resource to have at home. I consider and this electronic device can be use in two very different ways, either for good or bad. The influence it has nowadays in our life is incredible but real. Today we wake up and one of the first things we do is maybe turn on the T.V, even though we might not even be looking at it. We are at home and this device is on most of the time. When we eat, instead of sitting in the table where we are suppose to be we go to the couch in front of the T.V. It is bedtime and the television once more goes on and that is if it's not on because other wise the television is running pretty much 24/7. The consequences of watching so much T.V can be a very high percentage in or life time and moreover it causes a big difference in our life. After reading the excerpt of Marie Winn, "Television: The Plug-In Drug" I realized that there is a lot going on referring to the T.V and family issues. Therefore, I strongly agree that television interferes with family life and keeps families from interacting in meaningful ways. The television is one of the main factors that cause families life style to change, create a gap of communication between them and the opportunity for expressing within the family.
1) the thesis is Therefore, I strongly agree that television interferes with family life and keeps families from interacting in meaningful ways.
ReplyDelete2)You mention how the tv can be a bad tool more than what you mention that it can be a helpfull tool and also you mention that television is one of the main factors that that casuses families to cahnge.
3)you need to write more reasons why you think that tv is the reason why many families are changing there life styles.
4)you need to work more on your counter claims too so that the writer has both sides of the story.
5)before you turn it in you should cite like what pertentage of familes have more than one tv in their homes and how much time they spend watching tv.
6)you need to adress how it can help some people relax and relieve their stress and how we use it as a way to informw use about what is going on around us too.
7)you have a very good start but from what i read i believe that that is only your intruction paragraph and that you dont have any body paragraphs to support it. so just work on expanding your essay and yo will have a great paper.